Wednesday, May 10, 2006

Outline your novel in 30 minutes

Okay, not a honkin' 4k outline or anything. But this is an easy way to get the major points together. It's especially good if you aren't in to full outlines, but need a little guidance to get going without getting stuck panstering.

I've hit a block in my current novel, and this has helped me a bit. I reached a point where I knew where I wanted to begin, where I wanted to end up, but not sure what to throw in the middle. Kind of important stuff.

Here 'tis with an example for each:


1. At the start of your book, what distinguishes your protagonist from other people? What central strength does he/she have? How does this strength get him/her into trouble?
Strength: Sue's really good at problem solving. Trouble: She's always being brought in at the last minute to clean up other people's messes.

2. When the novel opens, what is s/he on the brink of doing? Why does he/she say she's going to do this? What does this action represent for the protagonist?

She's just moved into a new town and has volunteered to do the stage managing for the community theater. She says that theater work is fun, and she'll get to make new friends. This represents her attempt to become part of the new community.

3. What external situation will require the protagonist's participation throughout the course of the book? How does this connect with #2? Does it help or interfere? Can you build in a deadline for extra tension?

The community theater's director absconds with all their money. If they don't somehow pull off an economical but successful Hamlet performance in a week, the community theater will go bankrupt.

4. What is the protagonist's goal for the time the book covers? How does this connect with the external situation? Or does the external situation divert the protagonist from his/her goal? Why does the protagonist SAY he/she wants the goal? Is there a deeper motivation as yet unknown to him/her?

She wants to participate in a successful theater presentation. She says it's because it will be good for the community. A deeper motivation is that she needs to be part of a cohesive group or she'll be lonely and lost. All the problems in the external situation will be obstacles to participating in a successful presentation.

5. What problem (external conflict) does the external situation present? How can the protagonist eventually resolve that conflict?

She is dragooned into taking over direction of the community theater's performance of Hamlet one week before the first show, and she's never directed a play before. She's a good problem-solver, and she will use these skills to tackle all the theater's problems.

6. List at least three obstacles in the way of her resolving this conflict. Make one an internal obstacle/conflict.
There's not enough money for costumes.

None of the other actors think Sue can replace the gifted Stockinsky, the former director.
The actor playing Hamlet is a drunk.
Five days before the performance, her mother announces she hates her nursing home and wants to move in with Sue.
The theater's roof is leaking and rain is predicted for performance night.
Internal-- Sue's need to be part of a group and be loved makes it hard for her to take charge and say no.

7. How will the protagonist grow because of confronting these obstacles?

When she has to fire the drunken Hamlet and replace him with a young inexperienced understudy, she learns to trust her judgment, assert her authority, and risk alienating her fellows. That is, she becomes a leader.

8. What do you want to happen at the end of the book?

I want the production to be successful despite some last-minute problems, and I want her to accept her position as leader.

9. What will have to happen to the protagonist against his/her will to make your ending come about?

Sue will have to get the courage to fire the popular Hamlet actor and still use her people skills to rally the shocked cast. She'll also have to inspire the understudy to a great performance.

I found #6 to be most helpful in what I'm currently struggling with. I've been looking at it as needing to create a series of events that lead to each other. Instead, I just need to think of a few key obstacles, then guide them together. The word 'obstacles' really helped me too. In other help tips I've found they're called turning points or plot twists. But really, they're obstacles.


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6 comments:

Elisabeth Naughton said...

Did you get to Chris York's presentation in March regarding this same thing? Hers was outlining a novel in an hour - it came from Alicia's list here, but Chris has tweaked it and turned it into a 5 min. free-writing exercise for each question (we did 2 min. per question in the workshop and that was long enough! LOL). I think her list of questions are still up on the newsletter site. If you need a link, I can probably dig and find it.

Lisa Pulliam said...

I missed that meeting! But I remember everyone on the loop talking about how useful it was. I'm going to have to go check out the newsletter. Thanks ladies! Piper - I'm off to link you too. I have no idea why I didn't do that earlier, I read your blog all the time! Doh!

Michelle Rowen said...

Lisa... I replied to your email but it bounced back to me. I can do the interview no problem. I'll have the Q&A back to you after Daytona. K? Thanks... :-)

Lisa Pulliam said...

Thanks Michelle! Woohoo!

I'm quickly beginning to regret this domain transfer thing. I had no idea it takes up to two weeks! Arrggh! And e-mail bouncing? I need to call these a-holes. Have a great time in Daytona :-)

Brenda said...

I'm so glad I spent time this afternoon blog hopping to new places - I really needed this right now - thank you!

Anonymous said...

Really hard to read light grey on light pink; stopped a few sentences in.